- Extend the fading shot at 0.49
- Change the production name to M.SHARRATT RECORDS 0.51
- Look closely at the beat of the music and change the jump cut at the start of the music video, 1.12
- Slow down the image of the man walking past the cross dresser at 1.24
NEXT SHOTS TO CONSIDER
- Shots of actor implying his longing to wear women's clothing
- Shots of actor admiring his wife applying make up
- Admiring make up
So far a excellent, keep an eye on the beat and your transitions - looking forward to watching the rest. Well done Millie.
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